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SKY

I look up,
every night,
to glance at the stars,
one is always alone,
and the others are together,

I then look down,
everyday,
to see myself,
also alone,
as the others are together,

I walk around,
looking all around,
as the stars would,
staring down at us,
like bullys,

yet when its night,
I always look up,
I always see that star,
I connect to it,
we connect like souls,

one day,
I looked up,
I sore it gone,
I looked around,
it wasn't alone anymore,

It made me think,
I didn't want to be alone,
just like the star thought,
we connect,
as we all do,

it finally found a friend,
I found it after searching,
their wa

The Enemy WithinThe Enemy Within:

I have nothing that I can give
Cause I was never taught to live
How do I know what is pain?
I disappear into the rain

Carry me on angel's arms
Don't let me ever come to harm
The blade will cut into my skin
I face the enemy within...

And I feel him, and I feel him cry
And I feel him, and I feel him cry

Dear Enemy
What do you want from me?
Take me slowly
Are you the man I'm meant be?
Dear Enemy...

Suddenly the lights go out
I open up and try to shout
Gasping out my final cry
Is this how I'm meant to die?

Lead me home once again
Let me face this world and then-
I will try to get control
Won't let this fee

Your Words

Go right ahead, sir.
Keep stabbing at me.
Insult me with your words,
Your harsh, spiteful words,
Because I don't care anymore;
I'm too numb from all the agony
To even feel pain anymore.

Your ruthless insults,
Each like an individual knife,
Each opening up another wound,
Each slitting open another vien,
Each causing another river of blood,
Each slowly crumbling me to pieces,
Because it's not as if, initially,
I was normally the most confident person.

Why do I believe your name-calling?
Why is part of my mind soaking this all in,
And convincing myself that these are facts?
Tell me, sir, am I really stupid?
Do I seriously look

Empty.I feel so empty
I hate this place
I want everyone to disappear
All I ask is for my own space

This world darkens me
It crushes me to bits
And just the thought of being here
Pushes me into fits

The sun will flicker into dimness
The mountains I'll crush
I'll burn the oceans
The howling wind will hush

Nobody will ever smile again
I want to evaporate the sky
I can't wait for that horn to blow
This poem explains why

I'm the devil's perfection
Evil is why I live
There's everything to take
And I've stolen everything to give

All the frequent depressions
Break-ups and tears
I can scream my lungs out
But nobody hears

Nothing will

MasksWith big smiles she greeted her friends,
Drowning in the crowd of people.
How many claimed to be her loved ones?
Hundreds? Thousands? She lost count long ago.

They welcomed her with jokes and laughter,
and she replied with hugs and kisses,
Pretending not to see the cracks in their masks
Or the lies in their voices.

She knew they were hiding something,
She heard the whispers behind her back,
Saw the greed behind their smiles,
And sensed their hatred long ago.

And every day she felt another part
Of her soul breaking away.

At night she tried to fix it,
Trying to reattach the broken pieces,
But as the time went by she realized
T

Dance with the DevilStep into the circle
and dance with the Devil
in the song that never ends.

Let him take your pain away,
think of nothing more than this moment
and dance.

Come dance with him in the circle
and forget all your troubles
they won't matter anymore.

He just asks for that simple price
I'm sure that you already know.

Come dance with the devil darling
he'll take all your woes away.
Swing in the circle
to the beat that never ends.

Once you take that step
and enter the dance with the Devil
you'll never leave it again.

Sell your soul
and dance that eternal dance

Dance with the Devil
to music's soft embrace.

Sing along with the song

Alone, Hurt, Sharp, Sins, Edges, CutAlone
In the dark room
Made of my doubt
I pick up a piece
Of my broken heart

Sharp
I touch it
With my shaky finger tip
I feel it against me
I sigh and start think

Hurt
That's the word
It explains the feelings
The emotions
That I hide

Sins
The wrongs
That I have done
To god, mankind
And myself

Edges
They call to me
I know that I can't resist
I need this
I really do

Cut
I use the piece
Of my broken heart
And I cut my wrist
Hoping to never wake up
Again

Hard WorkBe yourself they said.
Through truth you'll get anywhere.
You're perfect the way you are they said.
You're something beautiful to share.

I remember hearing this all the time,
recollecting those words as I write this rhyme.
There was one thing that they forgot to say
which is what my mantra is here and today.

Though you may be you and the best to believe
you still need to work to be beneficial
in the lives of others and yours to achieve
anything that will not be something superficial.

People forgot to say that work is needed.
Not the normal amount that keeps you in the gray,
but mind wrenching, sweat creating, limit exceeded.
To

What Is Love? Ch.2*Emina's point-of-view*

I aimlessly follow Yuki to reach my next class.

Looking at my schedule, I realise I have science class next.

Oh joy, math then science… just great.

I barely know Yuki, so walking with him to science class was pretty quiet and quite awkward.

When we finally reach the classroom, I got stopped by the science teacher who looks at me with recognition while Yuki looks at the projection screen before sitting at a table.

The science teacher was a young brunette with hazel eyes, who was fairly tall and had a nice light skin. She tied up her hair in a ponytail, leaving only a few strands of hair on her face and she wo

What Is Love? Ch.1I stared, impressed, at the school I was now attending.

It looked like a mansion, and to me it seemed like it had a style of Japanese schools, as there were cherry blossom trees to the sides of the concrete pathway leading to the school. There was also, in what I would consider the center-point of the school's exterior, a fountain and in the center of the fountain was a statue of a proud and determined man. To both sides of the fountain, I could see some sports fields, revealing that this school had enough sports for the sportiest of people. Also, flowers were nicely placed around the area, adding a touch of calmness within the educational s

EscapeCome with me,
take my hand,
forget your every woe
And tell me, dear,
where exactly
would you like to go?

Let us go to Wonderland,
perhaps to Xanadu,
the Shire's nice,
this time of year,
and Narnia is, too.

To Lilliput!
To Brobdingnag!
We'll see such wonders grand!
Perhaps into the past, Or future,
Wherewhenever;
Take my hand.

SnowSnow

The coldness consumed me
and the snow blanketed me.
I let my body go numb
right beneath the snowy touch.
The thing I love so much
even brought frost to my heart.
It came down upon me,
looking beautiful in the streetlight,
and sprinkled frozen water around.
Before I knew it,
the beauty had stopped,
leaving me alone in the cold.
This is how it always ended.

Missing You At ChristmasMissing You At Christmas

Every time I see colorful lights,
I think of all our fun little nights.
Every time a Christmas tree shines,
I think of all those great times.
Every time I hear Christmas songs,
I think this is where you belong.
Every time I see a bright smile,
I think I haven't seen yours in a while.
Every time Christmas comes along,
I think of your voice like a song.
Every time the snows comes down,
I always wish you were around.

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by ~sonxfanchara, May 18, 2012, 1:31:58 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Bullying

Look into my eyes,
clouded with tears,
look at my chest,
it feels heavy,
look at my smile,
where it use to be,
look at my skin,
pale as ice,

Look into my eyes,
filled with life,
look at my chest,
it isn't heavy,
look at my smile,
its visible,
look at my skin,
a shade everyone sees,

Its how I want to be,
life like no other,
Happiness,
Sadness,
how are they the same,
emotions,
a upside down world,
a frown,

A mask on everyone,
their eyes dark,
their heart unvisible,
and what smile on there face,
there skin untouchable,

I'm different,
I don't want to be like others,
so I'm looked at,
differently,
bullied even,
a pain hard to feel,
time goes by fast,
my feet glued down,
tears rolling,
yet invisible,

a hand reaches out,
yet is ignored,
I want to be acknowladged,
yet unacknowladged,
is it supose to be hard,
yet its simple for others,

Bullying is hard,
hard to tackle,
hard to ignore,
hard to face,
hard to live up to life,

I'm bullied,
are you the bullied,
or the bully,
think befor speech,
don't follow other paths,
make your own,
don't bully,

it isn't right,
a pain like no other,
I have felt it,
even my sister,
I want no other,
to feel the pain I have yet to rid,
support those bullied,
and a smile might be possible,

Look once more,
around yourself,
its all around,
bullying.

_{Please take to note that this is happeneing all around, even to myself and my sister, this comes from my heart, its how I feel.
Please, if you see any one bullied, take to note to help them, and then, mabye, there'll be able to smile again because they know someone wants to help them and not join the others.

Please.

I do not want anyone else feeling the pain that I, my sister, and many others have been going through, I have been bullied for years and it is horrible, so, today, tommorow, you can make a change !

-Sonxfanchara.}

. B U L L Y I N G .by ~sonxfanchara

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

EDIT: I have edited some of my spelling mistakes, and other mistakes that I sore; please take to note that spelling isn't my strongest, so if you see any spelling mistakes Politely tell me please.

_{Please respect this and don't post hateful comments, because bullying is a huge issue, even too me, so please respect this and my views on bullying.

Ok so heres, like a poem, its from the heart, bullying has always affected my emotions and my self, and I've always wanted to get it off my cheast somehow, so this is how I did it...

Sometime in the future I'll be doing a flash story Like `yuumei about bullying, and the story is going to be 100% true as it will be based off mine and my sisters bullying issues, to show the bullying more realistic, instead of making it up...

Either way, I hope you enjoy this <3}

Critique by ~FujiChii May 21, 2012, 12:12:18 PM

This was strong and i liked how you called it out. This is a topic many people need to face and realize it's not some game. It's not a joke, it's real and a serious matter. People don't realize how their words and actions have strong affects on others. "Sticks and Stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me." It should actually be "Sticks and Stones may break my bones, but at least those will heal. Your words will forever scar me." Words linger. Physical pain can be healed. Both don't make anything better though. Both bullying, physical and verbal and even CYBER are wrong.

This is a beautiful literature piece that has a very strong and even personal meaning. I liked how you put in that it's happened to you. You've experienced it and so has your other family members. It means that you've been there and put into the shoes of kids who have been bullied through their lives. When a person reflects a personal experience to a topic, it gives it a stronger impact on others. It reaches out to them more and grabs their attention, especially when they themselves may have been experiencing bullying or had seen others being bullied.

The only flaw of the piece is the grammar and spelling, but they were minor and i think they really didn't distract readers so much. Those things could matter less compared to the message behind your piece.

It was really great. I support no bullying. It's something that seriously needs to stop. Everyone deserves the right to say I am a unique individual that deserves to be treated as an equal.

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~Purazuma Jan 29, 2013 Hobbyist Writer

Bullying is an untolerable affliction to many and should be made illegal for all the damages it has the potential to cause. This was a wonderful piece, it captured the emotion of the one being bullied quite well.

!HetaliaHetaonigirl Nov 23, 2012

I have been bullied for 8 years now. Since kindergarden. I'm in 7th grade now. I cut. I cry. I see no worth living. I have thoughts of suicide. I have all of thst stuff.

~sonxfanchara Nov 24, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

_{U shouldn't, ur in the same steps as me and my sister: we have been bullied since primary.
I have thought like that at times but ignored it as it isn't right to just be selfish and not think about how it would affect the people around me.

Plz don't think like that, in the future u can show the bullies that you are way better then them.}

!ChristineIsDEAD May 21, 2012

Bullying is something that no one should tolerate. Wonders if those teachers are so afraid of the bullies that they would find it much easier to blame the victim instead, like "it's your own fault to 'provoke' them" rather than helping you out, or at least trying to figure out the whole thing first...

I sincerely hope that you and your sister will be loved and protected and understood.

~sonxfanchara May 21, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

_{< I agree with you, its a problem getting out of hand, and its time for action to finally be taken to help those affected by bullying, because for starters its been going on far too long... And I have to agree with you there, if a teacher said that I would comment back, because how can the victim 'provoke' them, simply as. yeah...

Awww, thank you, your words mean alot <3 >}

~CheckeredRainbow May 19, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

This is very good. Bullying is a huge issue now that is simply ignored, being said that "kids will be kids" when most people don't know. I have had personal experiance, and seeing bullying urks me. I wish it on no one. Very inspiration, though, i love this.

~sonxfanchara May 19, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

_{< Thank you, I agree, I hate it when they say 'oh, its part of childhood' or 'kids will be kids' as if its some play thing, when in fact it isn't... again thank you ; w ; ,<333>}

~CheckeredRainbow May 19, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I agree so much and I am very comforted by the fact someone else realizes that this isnt child play its really and it hurts. I should be thanking you, for saying what the rest of us were afraid to say. ;3;

~sonxfanchara May 19, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

_{<of course it isn't child play, because child play is different from bullying; I wish they would realize that. //blushes// thank you, it was my pleasure to share this with everyone <3 >}

~CheckeredRainbow May 19, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Bullying is a horrid thing and I honestly love this thank you, once again

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